Sorry to say this, but it will very likely not make it. There is just too much clutter, but the photo also looks blurry. The yellow color can be reduced to look more blue by adjusting the Kelvin slider in the RAW converter (if you shoot RAW). Centering is fine for me.
Hello Andrew, I agree with Kas . The Engines and Titles seem Blurry especially the Engine and the right wings. And there are too many cars there ,clutter.